The dark realm of the abyss

Lily

character

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Rose

character

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The Mother

character

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Story so far

lore

{"type":"doc","content":[{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"Maintained by Paige — this recap updates automatically as new chapters land. Edit freely; your edits are folded into the next update. Delete it to reset.","marks":[{"type":"italic"}]}]},{"type":"heading","attrs":{"level":3},"content":[{"type":"text","text":"The Watch"}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"The story is set in a house where the narrator, a young man, lives with his mother and two sisters, Rose and Lily. The narrator has been drugging his family with pills dissolved in their water or tea, using a gold pocket watch to hypnotize them into submission. The house is described as having thick floors and heavy doors, and the family has learned to be silent when it matters."}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"In the first scene, the narrator has given Rose a pill, and she is in a suggestible state. He uses the watch to guide her, and she becomes obedient and pliant. He kisses her, then has her perform oral sex on him, and then penetrates her with his fingers, bringing her to orgasm. He then has her lick his fingers clean. The narrator notes that Rose was the loud one, the one who bit back, which is why she came first."}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"Lily, the quiet sister, is then brought in. She has also been given a pill, and the narrator guides her to kiss Rose. He then has sex with Rose from behind while she kisses Lily, and he comes inside her. He then has Lily place her hands on Rose's throat, and with his hands over hers, he strangles Rose to death. Lily asks if Rose is sleeping, and the narrator says yes."}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"The narrator then takes Lily to her room, where he has sex with her, also strangling her as he comes inside her, killing her. He then returns to Rose's room and has sex with her one more time before closing her eyes and covering her with a sheet. He does the same for Lily."}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"Downstairs, the mother has set the table with only two plates, and the narrator has been drugging her tea for a month. He uses the watch to make her forget that she ever had daughters, and she smiles, believing there is no one else in the house but the two of them. The story ends with the narrator noting the house's satisfied quiet, as if it has eaten."}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"Key details: The narrator has been leaving pills in his sisters' water glasses for a week before the events. He oiled the locks on the doors. The mother has been given a dose in her evening tea for a month. The narrator's voice is described as low, used for the dark rooms of the house. The watch is gold, on a chain, and is used to hypnotize. The pills are pink, taste of chalk and rosewater. The sisters are described as wearing white cotton or nightgowns. The narrator's cum is described as thick and hot. The sisters' deaths are by strangulation, with the narrator's hands over Lily's, and later by his own hand on Lily's throat. The mother's name is not given. The narrator's name is not given. The setting is a house, presumably in a rural or suburban area, with a radio playing downstairs. The time is evening, transitioning to night. The story is told in first person, from the narrator's perspective."}]},{"type":"heading","attrs":{"level":3},"content":[{"type":"text","text":"The Spiral"}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"The narrator now uses a silver chain with a flat disc engraved with a spiral, which he uses to hypnotize a new subject, Elsie. Elsie is a quiet, pliable girl who saves coins and works hard to be useful. The narrator uses the spiral to make her suggestible, then brings in three other girls—Mara (his twin, though they are mistaken for sisters), Chloe, and Bea—to perform sexual acts on Elsie while he watches and collects money from her. Elsie is brought to orgasm by Chloe's mouth and Bea's fingers, while Mara kisses her. The narrator places bills on the nightstand as a transaction, and Elsie asks for more. After the girls leave, Elsie returns on the fourth day, already wet, and the narrator brings in her younger sister, Flora, to watch and then participate. Elsie performs oral sex on Flora, while Chloe fingers Elsie from behind, and the narrator guides Flora's hand to touch Elsie. The scene is interrupted mid-sentence, but it is clear that the narrator is expanding his control over Elsie and her sister, using the spiral and the other girls to create a cycle of desire and payment."}]},{"type":"paragraph","content":[{"type":"text","text":"Key details: The spiral is silver, not gold, and the narrator lies about it being gold. Elsie is described as quiet, pliable, and saving coins. Mara is the narrator's twin, but they are mistaken for sisters. Chloe and Bea are other girls who participate. Elsie pays the narrator with coins and bills. The narrator uses the spiral to make Elsie suggestible, and she returns on the fourth day, already wet. Flora is Elsie's younger sister, brought in as a new participant. The scene ends with Elsie weeping as Flora touches her, and the narrator guiding Flora's hand."}]}]}

Story Direction

lore

Format: Something else Genre: Something else In the writer's words: Horror Tone: Steamy & romantic Premise: A evil Brothers sexual exploitation of naive sisters as he use mind control and brainwashing techniques on each of them behind closed doors of there bedrooms while his mother is down stairs in the kitchen. He uses pink pills and psychological To trick each sister to have a go at hypnosis. With his golden pocket watch Which leads onto soft play and french kisses between. Him and his pray As he seduce each beautiful sister In her bedroom. Spreading there thighs wild to lick there sweet innocent pussys as he gets them into a 69 position so they can taste his hard tip of his cock until his cums with thick ropes of creamy cum down there throat into her stomach. Filling them up as he fingers them. Eventually getting his sister's to have incestral French kiss between themselves as he fucks one of them at the same time. Glazed eyes empty eyes it's beautiful sight he thinks as he swing the pocket watch back and forth between his naive siblings Before strangleing each of the sisters as the other helped in her own sister demise as the gentle struggle as each sisters eyes glazed over rolling in the back of there heads as I strangle them to death with the aid of the other sister help. Rose who's the feisty ones is the one lilly helps me murder in her own bedroom behind closed doors. Before moving onto lily's as I strangle her to death as a fuck her. With each sister dead on the bed I finally fuck each of them again before closing the door and walking to the kitchen where mother is to have my own way with her after the pocket watch as done the trick she never remember she had daughters Captured during onboarding — update this entry as the story takes shape.

The Brother

plotArc

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